Man, i like that, but theres some points that u have to know..
First of all, the melodies are disconecteds.. i dunno if was the instruments, or the melodies, but the intro, the chorus and the rest, seems every part belongs diferents musics

i think that u have to use a kick more agressive, like the subkicks..

and to finish, i say to you that i really like this track, keep producing and improoving your song
Peace

Danxis
(check out my songs :v)

Great job man ! ..
i think you to do some changes in this song.. try to do a format.. like, intro, vocals, melody and this stuff.. this looks like a demo.. like they said, try to down the vocal volume.. and keep greating..

Hey Man, now i can say: Its amazing!
for real, its so good.. you create your own style with this draw.. there are some details that you can improve on the draw, but details are details.. and on this one, these details dont matter..

keep posting your Draws, with more draws, more votes i can give, and recomend you to Art Portal
Bye
<Danth>

Hi mr. Silva hehe, its great for the first..
the mistakes i have said for you, in otther ocasion..

keep posting your draws.. i will help you to join on the Art portal, scouting you..

<Danth>